The final feedback.
Jagged outline or blurred outline on sun?
Here is the final feedback from my teacher for the final draft. She personally liked the blurred sun style choice, but, as she noted, it was her personal preference, and so I kept the jagged sun, as I felt it sort of tied in more with the overall style.
However there were some things I couldn't keep the same: standard industry size of the certification box is about 50% smaller than what I currently had it as. So that had to change.
Finally, she suggested scaling down the 'Empire' review at the top of the page, although, after testing this idea, I felt it slightly ruined the symmetry of the poster, so I changed it back.
And here it is!
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